Writing Short Stuff

by Jackie Houchin

How short can you write a story?  If you are doing NaNoWriMo this month, your goal is 50,000 words, about a 175-page book.  How about only 10,000 words, or 5,000? 2,000?

In Writer’s Digest, the September/October issue, author Ran Walker wrote a very interesting article titled “10 Reasons to Write a 100-Word Story.”  Say, what? 100 words? Yes! In his article he describes the benefits of writing “the smallest stories.” I hope to borrow from his wonderful piece, and write a story…right here…right now…in only 100 words (including the title)!

Here, briefly, are the reasons Ran Walker gives for trying your hand at a 100-word story.

  1. “The initial drafts of your stories don’t take nearly as long to write.”

Okay, here goes:  It was a dark and stormy night… No, no, no! 

Okay, again:  Last night Wesley dreamed he saw a floating lantern coming towards his bed. It seemed to beckon him to follow. In pajamas, sans slippers or robe, he wafted clumsily out the open window pursuing the light. “How could this be?” he thought, “I’m not Peter Pan!”  Wesley looked at his dog far below, barking soundlessly, and threw her a biscuit from his pocket. (No, no no, on that last part. No doggie biscuit.) 

Again: …barking soundlessly. A white owl flew by and winked at Wesley. 

Good grief!  I’m at 64 words without a villain, climax, denouement, or the title!! This is harder than I thought. I’d better get to the suspense and the ending!

A note drifted from the beak of the owl and Wesley caught it. He bent forward to read it by the lantern light. ‘Don’t forget to feed the dog. I’m working tonight. Love, Mom.’ “Oh, no!” thought Wesley. “Poor Maddie!”  Suddenly the lantern disappeared and Wesley began falling, falling. Something caught his foot, but he landed with an “Ooof!” On his bedroom floor, foot tangled in a nappy blanket, Wesley felt the happy wet tongue of Maddie on his cheek. “Finally,” she woofed.

This can’t be!  It’s at 148 words!  And what should the title be?  Lantern Flight? Owl’s note? Falling?  Ooof?  I definitely need to do some editing, but that’s Ran Walker’s 7th point.

   2. You are not tied to the traditional “Hero’s Journey” or Freytag Plot Arc.

Hmm, I didn’t have series of obstacles or a narrative arc, but I did have “rising” action, climax, and “falling” action. And a little denouement lick.

   3. You can let your inner poet come out.

Not only pretty words and/or rhyme, I must make every. word. count.  I’ll consider that when I go back to edit out “my darlings’.

   4. You can experiment with different genres without worrying about how it will affect your brand.

Well, my Wesley story is a kids’ story, so that matches my “cough, cough” brand.  It’s a bit of a fantasy genre however.

   5. The focus on a specific word count forces you to think about your story differently.

Boy, is that ever right.  Let’s see if I can chuck a few words right now.  100 is a stern taskmaster.  “Sans slippers or robe” has to go.  “He saw” can go as well. And “it seemed to” also.  Hey, this is fun. That’s NINE WORDS excised.

   6. You can focus more on movement within a single scene.

I think I have movement – floating, wafted, pursuing, flew by, drifted, falling, falling…..   whoa, I’m getting dizzy!

   7. It’s an excellent way to learn how to edit.

Walker says, “If each word was a dollar word, would you be getting maximum value for your $100?  Why write ten words when five will do?” 

   8. It forces you to refocus your story and choose only what is important.

He adds, “And keeps you from going off in tangents.” 

   9. It allows you to really pay attention to grammar and punctuation.

   10. It’s something you can do for fun, even if your intention is to write longer works.

Walker says, “The added incentive is that if you like the ‘rush’ you get from finishing a story, you will receive that feeling much faster with a 100-word story. At a time when people are wrestling to carve out time to read and to write, it is nice to know there is a writing form that lends itself to being consumed in minutes (versus weeks) and to being written in a single setting. Why not try one today?”

Okay, here is my edited version: (I had to cut out 49 words, then rearrange and substitute what was left.)

“REMINDER”

Last night Wesley dreamed a lantern beckoned to him out his open window. Clad only in pajamas, he floated after it.

He saw his dog far below, barking soundlessly. An owl flew by and dropped a note from its beak. Wesley caught it and angled it toward the light.

“Don’t forget to feed the dog. I’m working late tonight. Love, Mom.”

 “Oh, poor Maddie!”

The lantern disappeared. Wesley began falling. Something caught at his foot and he landed softly. On his bedroom floor, tangled in a blanket, Wesley felt Maddie’s warm, wet tongue on his cheek. 

“Finally!” she woofed.

 

Well, what do you think? Does it work?  

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I also got a few tips from author, Maggie King (MaggieKing.com) about writing regular length short stories. Her “Cupcakes and Emeralds” is featured in the new mystery anthology DEATH BY CUPCAKE, published by Elm Books

She answered my questions, “There has to be a cupcake in the story, so first I come up with a story idea. I love revenge tales, but who is seeking revenge against whom, and why? Once I figure that out, I can decide on plot, characters, red herrings, and setting. I must decide if cupcakes will be part of the plot, or a mere prop. The “body” is found in a church – my unexpected aspect – but is the church another red herring?  At the end I like to circle back to the beginning. “

Thanks Maggie, if anyone wants to check out her story and the other seven in the anthology, the link on Amazon is Death by Cupcake. 

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Ran Walker (RanWalker.com) is the award-winning author of 23 books. He teaches creative writing at Hampton University and lives in Virginia with his wife and daughter.

His latest book, KEEP IT 100, a collection of one hundred 100-word stories is now available everywhere.  The link on Amazon: KEEP IT 100

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Quote by crime novelist Jo Nesbo,

“When you write a novel, it’s like steering a supertanker. You have to plan; you have to have a route; you can’t just go left and right.

I started writing lyrics and the challenge was to write a story in three verses and a refrain. For me, a short story is like writing songs. You can sit down and write and you can quickly tell whether it’s working or not. And if it works, it may already be finished. That’s a real good feeling, to go to bed at night having written a story.

Also, you don’t have to explain a short story. When you write a novel, you have to think, “What is this really about?”  A short story can just have a feeling and that’s OK.”

Are YOU ready to write ONE HUNDRED words?

Author: photojaq

First, I am a believer in Jesus Christ, so my views and opinions are filtered through what God's Word says and I believe. I'm a wife, a mom, a grandma and now a great grandma. I write articles and reviews, and I dabble in short fiction. I enjoy living near the ocean, doing gardening (for beauty and food) and traveling - in other countries, if possible. My heart is for Christian missions, and I'm compiling a collections of Missionary Kids' stories to publish. (I also like kittens and cats and reading mysteries.)

16 thoughts on “Writing Short Stuff”

  1. What a trip, Jackie. Short, but full of info, and I don’t mean just your finished 100 word story. Your explanation going in and your first try and then the final draft and then the tips from other writers has me breathless with information on writing in general, though do think all stories should have a point, as it were. Yours: Feed the dog! Thanks.

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  2. Jackie, thanks for letting me contribute to your excellent post. Thanks also for suggesting DEATH BY CUPCAKE to your readers. I’m sure you’re aware of
    Rose City Sister Flash Fiction (https://www.rosecitysisters.com/). I hope to submit to them in the coming months, although I might be closer to their upper limit of 1K words. Maybe in the coming months, I’ll get to meet Ran Walker in person. He’s certainly inspiring.

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    1. It’s harder than you think to write a story in 100 words. I love to use descriptive words, and had to cut out many of them. I’d love to check out Mr Walker’s book and see how he did it… 100 times! Thanks for your input, Maggie.

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  3. Jackie – lots of info and lots of chuckles in your comments. Frankly, writing exercises are fine but I’d rather be adding 100 words into my next mystery, and keep going.
    Thanks for an interesting post.

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    1. And you are so good at those novels! I envy your “long” writing skills. I’m just better at the short stuff. I have no “staying” power, like you and the other novelists on this blog. Take those 100 words, and run with them, Jill!

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  4. Short stories and I have always gotten along well, but mine are a lot longer than 100 words. I’ll have to give it a try! Thanks for the tips.

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  5. Lots of helpful information here, Jackie, culminating in your cute story. For me, two tips – #5 and #7 – hit home. I’ve written a few pieces of micro fiction (for Rose City Sisters) as a challenge. The experience forces a sharper focus on words, always good to stimulate creativity and encourage brevity. I recommend this challenge to all writers, especially those whose manuscripts need whittling.

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    1. Yes, I agree Miko, editing is really important. I actually like to do it. And I’ve read a bunch of books that could have been edited further. But, that said, it IS hard to kill those words or phrases that you thought were so special.

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  6. Jackie, I loved this post! I doubt I could do the “100” words, but a wonderful way I’m thinking to organize my thoughts, actions, plot…I’m going to try this tomorrow, I’m thinking it will help me…
    Saying again, loved it, and all the ways it took, and I think will continue to take my creative process…

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  7. What a wonderful post, Jackie. And what a clear design of how to ‘de-clutter’ our writing. I had the same reaction to that “Write a story in 100 words” – Eek!

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  8. To you novelists, Rosemary, 100 words must seem like a “sigh” in the story! But for me, a person who can’t stick to long writing enough to finish, it’s a fun challenge. I have done longer short stories – my Missionary Kids in Africa dozen for instance. But… you “could” treat it as an exercise to limber up the fingers on your keyboard one cold morning….

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    1. Thanks for reading my blog post. I did so enjoy your Writer’s Digest story. And I plan to check our your 100 100-word stories. WOW. That’s a lot! Not sure I could get as many ideas!!

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