Giving Back

by Gayle Bartos-Pool

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I’ve learned a lot from other writers. This blog has allowed me to gain knowledge about what we need to do to get those words on paper or into our computers. We might have a few different technical methods for getting that story actually written down, but many times I’ve noticed that we use similar ways to come up with the narrative.

Many writers actually let their characters “talk” to them so they can craft a unique person in their story. I’ve done it so often that I rely on that connection with those characters when I’m writing.

When I first had the idea for my Johnny Casino books, I sat down and basically let Johnny give me a two-page monologue about who he was. That “chat” ended up being the opening pages of my first book about Mr. Casino.

I learned about creating a biography for a character when I took acting classes from a terrific actor named Rudy Solari. He told us when we were doing a scene from a play to write out a short bio about the character we were playing. The script might have the words and the actions of our character, but Rudy wanted us to know more about the person we were playing like their education, where they grew up, and how they viewed the world so we would know who our character really was when we first stepped onto the stage and delivered our lines.

I use that method when I write my characters in my short stories and novels. When I start crafting the story, I jot down the name, age, general attitude and some special characteristic of that person so I can keep track of him or her throughout the story. I don’t want a 25 year-old blonde named Mary to turn into a 45 year-old red head named Mildred later on in the book because I forgot who she was supposed to be.

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That lesson from acting class has stayed with me for over fifty years. It works. I learned a few other things from actors, other writers, and by just honing my craft. But for many years I thought I should share this stuff I was learning with other writers, so when I became Speakers Bureau Director for Sisters-in-Crime/Los Angeles, I thought I would put on a few classes to let other writers know how I got words on paper.

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This “giving back” to fellow writers became something I have done for years. Not everybody can give money to groups and causes they endorse, but we can give of ourselves. I’ve done this by speaking at women’s clubs, libraries, and to other writer groups. And the times I’ve been on a writers’ panel has always been fun, because I learn new things, too.

Something else I try to do is to encourage people, not just somebody wanting to write that first novel, but to regular people who have lives that are frankly extremely interesting. I tell them to try writing their own autobiography so they can share their life experiences with their family and friends and maybe a whole bunch of other people who learn that this person they just met has a book out there about their incredibly interesting life. That just might prompt the next guy or gal to jot down a few of their own memories for a book of their own. But somebody else learns from that memoir – the writer. They learn things about themselves. Nothing wrong with that.

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I want to encourage people to write and to read. Both are becoming a lost art. Look at the handwriting of kids and even young adults nowadays. It looks like a first grader. Ask a teenager what was the last book they read. You’ll be lucky if they ever read a book outside the classroom.

By encouraging people to write, we might get a few more words on paper, a few more ideas in print, and a few more interesting stories to keep people company when the Internet is down. People might actually see there really is a world out there and they are an interesting part of it and they have a few stories to tell as well.

Read On, Write On, and Teach Others!

Here are a few of us Writers-in-Residence at one of the writers conventions.

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Or how about one of the panels I put on at the Burbank Library. It was a Total Hollywood moment…And yeah, I had fun doing those events.

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Author: gbpool

A former private detective and once a reporter for a small weekly newspaper, Gayle Bartos-Pool (writing as G.B. Pool) writes three detective series: the Gin Caulfield P.I. series (Media Justice, Hedge Bet & Damning Evidence), The Johnny Casino Casebook Series, and the Chance McCoy detective series. She also penned a series of spy novels, The SPYGAME Trilogy: The Odd Man, Dry Bones, and Star Power. She has a collection of short stories in From Light To DARK, as well as novels: Eddie Buick’s Last Case, Enchanted: The Ring, The Rose, and The Rapier, The Santa Claus Singer, and three delightful holiday storied, Bearnard’s Christmas, The Santa Claus Machine, and Every Castle Needs a Dragon. Also published: CAVERNS, Only in Hollywood, and Closer. She is the former Speakers Bureau Director for Sisters in Crime/Los Angeles and also a member of Mystery Writers of America and The Woman’s Club of Hollywood. She teaches writing classes: “Anatomy of a Short Story,” (The Anatomy of a Short Story Workbook and So You Want to be a Writer are available.) “How To Write Convincing Dialogue” and “Writing a Killer Opening Line” in sunny Southern California. Website: www.gbpool.com.

13 thoughts on “Giving Back”

  1. Gayle, you have been incredibly generous with writers over the years with your classes, talks and your Anatomy of a Short Story Workbook. I still hear your advice when I’m writing, and it works.

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  2. Gayle, such wise points, and good suggestions to ‘pass it on.’ I volunteered to teach a memoir writing class at our local senior center, and was surprised and grateful to learn I’d be paid for my efforts. I have taught several such classes since then, and am almost giddily astonished to find how much I enjoy teaching the classes, mostly because the students are so enthused. Thanks again.

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  3. Gayle, your interaction with other writers is wonderful, and your description of some of it in this post is inspirational. Thanks for all of it!

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    1. We all learn by reading other people’s books and passing along some of those interesting tidbits to people who want to write.

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  4. Gayle – for as long as I’ve known you, you have shared your talents and time with others. Your writing workshops at the Woman’s Club of Hollywood were wonderful and sorely missed. You have continuously supported and encouraged me in my own writing, as you have done with so many others.

    And you organized this Writers In Residence group all those years ago. You have certainly ‘given back’ so much of yourself. A huge thank you!

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    1. Rosie, I wouldn’t have missed getting to know all the writers who have joined our group. We had and are still having fun. And look at what we have learned along the way.

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    1. The coat is Russian squirrel. I won’t tell the little guys I feed in my backyard that particular story. It was my mom’s coat given to her by my dad when fur coats were the thing to do. Nobody wears fur anymore. I never wore it, except when I did that event. I still have the coat.

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  5. Very inspiring and motivating post, Gayle. Giving Back, in large and small ways, is an ideal to always keep in mind. Love the photos! As I promote this blog on my Instagram and Facebook pages, I always appreciate photos with the posts.

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    1. Thanks Maggie. I wish they had groups here in Ohio where I live now. They do all their events via Zoom or whatever. I did get to do an event at the local library here. I hope to do more.

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